ohmygodimshitatnames:

maryaliceswan:

twilight rewrite: everything is the same up until the baseball scene in which victoria falls in love with bella and spends the rest of the time trying to seduce her

Consider:

It’s been so long since Victoria has thought of humans as anything other than food that she has no idea how to get one to like her. She then proceeds to show Bella affection the same way a cat would:

– bought home a live person to show Bella how she hunts (this only happened once because Bella was freaked out?? and made Victoria let the dude go??) 

– following her from room to room without acknowledging her

– staring at her for awkwardly extended periods of time

– leaving gifts for Bella at her front door (Victoria has no concept of monetary worth so the gifts range from things like a shiny rock she found in the forest to thousands of dollars she took from the wallet of a man she killed)

The central conflict of the story is that Victoria thinks she’s doing a really good job of acting normal and Bella thinks Victoria is planning on killing her.